Monday 13th mar 2017
What's in the box
Today we did a cool activity. There was a box and we had to guess what's in the box.
My one was a ballerina shoe.I felt a long string it felt squishy and . the shoe felt like leather.
When I took the blindfold off it was pink and a little bit stretchy and hard I was like “WHAT THE HECK” ??? and it was a little bit fun but i just don't like the shoe.
Did I remember to include….
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yes
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Title
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yes
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Introduction
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yes
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Who, what, when, where, why, who, how
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yes
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3 paragraphs - burger model
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yes
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Conclusion
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yes
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Specific adjectives
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yes
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Simile/Metaphor
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yes
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Different punctuation
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yes
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Short sentence for effect
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yes
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Correct spelling throughout the story
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yes
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A sentence you have added in editing
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yes
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A sentence you have moved in editing
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yes
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Sentence starters given
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And this is when i was editing.
The shoe was wired so as like my christmas present I had and the long rubbery thick string the string was like a rubbery giraffe.
the game was fun because I always wanted to play this game .
Monday 13th mar 2017
What's in the box
Today we did a cool activity. There was a box and we had to guess what's in the box.
My one was a ballerina shoe.I felt a long string it felt squishy stretchy like a squid and . the shoe felt like leather.
When I took the blindfold off it was pink and a little bit and hard I was like “WHAT THE HECK” ???.
the game was fun because I always wanted to play this game .
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