Focuses for writing this week
Explanation in my own words.
How to use speech marks
Before and after the talking.
How to put in other punctuation
Before the speech marks
When to start a new line or when to keep writing
Under the first dialogue.
Different words for ‘said’
Like as he drank milk
“Who can I pick on?” asked Miss Ashley.
“Me” replied Timote.
“How was your day?” asked Hope.
“Great, thank you” replied Miss Ashley.
“How was your weekend” asked Dwyane.
“It was good” responded Havea.
If more than one person is talking, you put the reply underneath.
Mary was a beautiful girl who was wearing her long black hair in two plaits. She asked her mum, “can I go to the pools today?”.
“Why do you want to go” mum replied.
“It’s hot and I want to cool off”.
If it’s only one person, you keep going.
Little red riding hood walked along the dirt path and thought to herself “I’m getting hungry”. She had walked a looooonng way but the thought of warm apple pie when she got to grandma’s house kept her going.
MY GROUP’S EXAMPLE.
“Do u like chickens?” asked stanley as he drank his tea .
“Yes I do I eat them” Responded Havea.
“No it’s not healthy for you” said Keru as he ate a cake .
“Oh ok is vegetables healthy “ yelled stanley.
“Yes is that a stupid question” Havea said politely.
“Of Course it’s healthy” said Keru.
“Do you play Fortnite?” Havea Said.
“Change subject” As Stanley rolled his eyes.
“I play it on my ipad 2” replied keru.
“What is your username?” Stanley asked.
“Keruazap that’s my username” said keru.
“Mine is XxCortezzJadenxX” as Havea Drank tea.``
“Mine is STANFACE034”replied Stanley.
“Did u know that there is a new game it’s called battlelands” replied keru.
“ That must be cool” Havea said with an Exciting Face .