Monday, 20 March 2017
WALT navigate websites
Thursday, 16 March 2017
The magic box - recount
Monday 13th mar 2017
What's in the box
Today we did a cool activity. There was a box and we had to guess what's in the box.
My one was a ballerina shoe.I felt a long string it felt squishy and . the shoe felt like leather.
When I took the blindfold off it was pink and a little bit stretchy and hard I was like “WHAT THE HECK” ??? and it was a little bit fun but i just don't like the shoe.
Did I remember to include….
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yes
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Title
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yes
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Introduction
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yes
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Who, what, when, where, why, who, how
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yes
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3 paragraphs - burger model
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yes
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Conclusion
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yes
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Specific adjectives
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yes
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Simile/Metaphor
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yes
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Different punctuation
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yes
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Short sentence for effect
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yes
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Correct spelling throughout the story
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yes
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A sentence you have added in editing
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yes
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A sentence you have moved in editing
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yes
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Sentence starters given
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And this is when i was editing.
The shoe was wired so as like my christmas present I had and the long rubbery thick string the string was like a rubbery giraffe.
the game was fun because I always wanted to play this game .
Monday 13th mar 2017
What's in the box
Today we did a cool activity. There was a box and we had to guess what's in the box.
My one was a ballerina shoe.I felt a long string it felt squishy stretchy like a squid and . the shoe felt like leather.
When I took the blindfold off it was pink and a little bit and hard I was like “WHAT THE HECK” ???.
the game was fun because I always wanted to play this game .
Thursday, 9 March 2017
Wednesday, 8 March 2017
Smarty Pants week 6
my name is Stanley and me on the left with the red book that's me we are reading trash and treasure.
I've got better at my fluently and stopping at the hard words.
I've got better at my fluently and stopping at the hard words.
the hamburger paragraph
Topic sentence means the main ideas
Supporting sentences means details.
Conclusion sentences gives a reflective comment about the events .
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