my name is Jedi and I am a year eight in rimu class. I love the way you have chosen to present your post. It's really creative and eye catching. Although this post is super awesome already, I think that to really blow people away you should. Maybe add a bit more into your introduction. Maybe say what you found challenging while making this, or what you enjoyed or say who you might have worked with to make this.That way it would give us a bit more understanding as to why you made this post.
Hey there Stanley,
ReplyDeletemy name is Jedi and I am a year eight in rimu class. I love the way you have chosen to present your post. It's really creative and eye catching. Although this post is super awesome already, I think that to really blow people away you should. Maybe add a bit more into your introduction. Maybe say what you found challenging while making this, or what you enjoyed or say who you might have worked with to make this.That way it would give us a bit more understanding as to why you made this post.
I can't wait to see what happens!
-Jediπ
Thank you for your feedback. bye.
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