Monday, 19 September 2016

The house

One day this man was the last person standing he . Went to this hunted Scary house it had dead people Under . The house he didn't know That there was dead people. “Why Is a house in the woods” as he said in a confused voice.He got in side He said in a BIG VOICE ZZZ ZOMBIES and it was just stachus .

2 comments:

  1. I LOVE this sentence- "Why Is a house in the woods?” he said in a confused voice. It shows how your character is feeling at this point in time. Keep it up!

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